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revision: love is what we need by ~MuseOfMusic:iconMuseOfMusic:

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revision is my religion
got to struggle, got to keep up
x and y combine to make z
got to remember, have to retain

facts and figures
theories and mythologies
imagination or inspiration
culture the knowledge inside

my revision guide is my bible
got to keep the faith, got to learn
othello's theme of jealousy
blends into reality; have to stop

language and literature
indivualistic approaches
no, learn the already-worn path
so as not to stray too wrong

my revision plan is my calander
mapping out my future
structuring thought-out actions
into block segments to digest

my life is a gaping hole
filling with information
from the day i was born
till the day we all die

enough with the fact-filling
i will learn for myself
i will see the world with no clouds
blocking my imaginiation
©2004-2009 ~MuseOfMusic
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Submitted: December 22, 2004
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don't ask about the title, i haven't got a clue where the second part fits in with the poem, but it sort of fit while i was thinking of the title. (taken from London Funk Allstars - love is what we need)
this poem is for those of you revising for January, like me, whether it be mocks, resits, or specific modules.

picture taken from a random search for christmas stuff on google
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`Rushy:iconRushy: Dec 22, 2004, 4:44:39 AM
I really liked the last line in this piece (not that I didn't like the rest mind you) it just seems to sum things up so well.

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~MuseOfMusic:iconMuseOfMusic: Dec 22, 2004, 4:48:09 AM
:) it just sums up having to cram your brain with facts you might not necessarily be interested in learning. what if we were to let our minds run free? but then, we probably wouldn't advance far in the future

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`Rushy:iconRushy: Dec 22, 2004, 4:49:49 AM
I always thought that in spite of our continued learning we seem to repeat the errors of the past in wars and relationships. Why not just let it all run free and see what new things we can come up with?
Who knows where we could go from there?

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~MuseOfMusic:iconMuseOfMusic: Dec 22, 2004, 4:56:19 AM
it is true, i'd love to do it, i think that as humans we are either too scared, or not sure how we would let our cultured minds be free. bit of a matrix-type situation.

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`Rushy:iconRushy: Dec 22, 2004, 4:58:06 AM
There is so much more to freeing your mind.

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~MuseOfMusic:iconMuseOfMusic: Dec 22, 2004, 4:58:43 AM
yes, i want to know!

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`Rushy:iconRushy: Dec 22, 2004, 5:00:06 AM
As do we all ;)

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~MuseOfMusic:iconMuseOfMusic: Dec 22, 2004, 5:00:44 AM
x) life would be so much different if we all could.

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`Rushy:iconRushy: Dec 22, 2004, 5:01:36 AM
A truly free spirit is a great thing indeed.

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